Nothing else does more to make a reader love the characters (Training)

“Nothing else does more to make a reader love the characters or to allow her to share in the characters’ emotions.” — Alice Gaines


I’m passionate about point of view and work hard to help my clients’ work and my own shine in this area.

I am always looking for specific and tangible ways to make my fiction stronger, so that readers can’t put down my books.

I imagine you are too!

That’s why I’m so excited to bring you this live training soon on mastering Deep Point of View, by expert instructor, and USA Today bestselling author, Alice Gaines.

All the info and how to register here:

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This Powerful Tool Pulls Readers Into Your Story

What if you could master a simple technique to make your stories irresistible to your readers?

Even if your prose is beautiful, your characters feel alive, and your plot twists and turns — you can still get one-star reviews complaining that your story didn’t grab readers.

There’s a technique that will help your readers fall in love with your characters, so they feel your characters’ emotions as the story unfolds.

That technique is Deep Point of View (POV) — a powerful tool for pulling readers into your story.

We really don’t want readers saying that they just couldn’t get into your story.

Or that they didn’t care about your characters to keep reading.

But if you want to write your story so that your reader just can’t put your book down… that’s the power of Deep Point of View.

“Nothing else does more to make a reader love the characters or to allow her to share in the characters’ emotions [than deep point of view].” — Alice Gaines

When you use the techniques of deep point of view:

  • Readers experience the story through your character’s eyes
  • Readers are immersed in the story world, seeing it more vividly
  • Readers care more about your characters… so they care more about your story

USA Today bestselling author, a PhD in Psychology from UC Berkeley, and experienced teacher, Alice Gaines, will show you how…

You’re invited to our…



In this 90-minute training, you’ll learn:

  • What is Deep Point of View and how to access it
  • How to spot the distancing language that creates a barrier between the story and your reader
  • What language tools bring the reader right into the story and into your characters
  • Other tools that help create Deep Point of View
  • Why you may not want to always use Deep Point of View

Alice Gaines has only presented this material to two other groups, to rave reviews.

And now she will be offering this webinar exclusive training to us.

You’ll walk away from this training with specific tools for mastering Deep Point of View.

Not only that, but you’ll also learn how to spot when you’re using distancing language and slipping out of Deep Point of View.

Don’t miss out on the chance to master these tools to create intimacy between your story and your readers!

Our training will be Wednesday, April 25, 2018, 5pm PT/8pm ET

You can register now for… MASTERING DEEP POINT OF VIEW

Register now before Wednesday, April 25, 2018 to get the discounted price of $37 (after that the price goes up).


After the training, you’ll get:

  • A 90 minutes of training in Video (MP4) and audio (MP3)
  • A PDF containing all the slides
  • A transcript of the live training
  • A Cheat sheet
  • “Getting the Author Off the Page” By Alice Gaines

If you can’t make the live training, you’ll get a replay in video and audio.

And as always, you can ask us follow-up questions if you need help applying these concepts to your story.

You get lifetime access to this exclusive training that can radically improve the reader’s experience of your story.

Take advantage of this special training today!

We’re looking forward to seeing you there!

Beth & Alice



USA Today bestselling author Alice Gaines writes about nice people having outrageous sex.

She’s published with numerous houses, including Red Sage, Dorchester, Harlequin Spice Briefs, Carina Press, and Avon Impulse.

Her Regency romance, Captain and Countess, was one of the first ten books selected for Kindle Scout.

Over her long career, she’s won several awards and contests for her writing. She currently writes erotic contemporary romance and sizzling paranormal romance for Entangled Publishing and Changeling Press.

With a PhD in Psychology from UC Berkeley, she’s a firm believer that Deep Point of View is a powerful tool for pulling readers into your story.

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