This Powerful Tool Pulls Readers Into Your Story

What if you could master a simple technique to make your stories irresistible to your readers?

Even if your prose is beautiful, your characters feel alive, and your plot twists and turns -- you can still get one-star reviews complaining that your story didn't grab readers.

There’s a technique that will help your readers fall in love with your characters, so they feel your characters' emotions as the story unfolds.

“…made my writing so much stronger”


Romance Author

That technique is Deep Point of View (POV) -- a powerful tool for pulling readers into your story.

We really don’t want readers saying that they just couldn’t get into your story.

Or that they didn’t care about your characters to keep reading.

But if you want to write your story so that your reader just can’t put your book down… that’s the power of Deep Point of View.

"Nothing else does more to make a reader love the characters or to allow her to share in the characters’ emotions [than deep point of view]." 

-- Alice Gaines

When you use the techniques of deep point of view:

-- Readers experience the story through your character's eyes

-- Readers are immersed in the story world, seeing it more vividly

-- Readers care more about your characters... so they care more about your story

USA Today bestselling author and experienced teacher, Alice Gaines, will show you how…

You’re invited…



In this 90-minute training, you’ll learn:

  • What is Deep Point of View and how to access it
  • How to spot the distancing language that creates a barrier between the story and your reader
  • What language tools bring the reader right into the story and into your characters
  • Other tools that help create Deep Point of View
  • Why you may not want to always use Deep Point of View

Alice Gaines has only presented this material to two other groups, to rave reviews.

And now she will be offering this webinar exclusive training to us.

You’ll walk away from this training with specific tools for mastering Deep Point of View.

Not only that, but you’ll also learn how to spot when you’re using distancing language and slipping out of Deep Point of View.

Don’t miss out on the chance to master these tools to create intimacy between your story and your readers!

You can still register for… 


Register now by Wednesday, May 31, 2018 to get the discounted price of $47 (after that the price goes up).

Mastering Deep Point of View

Loved it! The one very valuable take away for me was the confirmation that I’m handling my chapters/POV shifts correctly. That worried me. Now I know. The part about verbs was great."

Lea Kirk

Science Fiction Romance Author

With this training, you’ll get:

  • Over 90 minutes of training in Video (MP4) and audio (MP3)
  • A PDF containing all the slides
  • A transcript of the live training
  • A Cheat sheet
  • “Getting the Author Off the Page” By Alice Gaines
  • pencil
    Access to the author community, Fellowship of the Pen, including live monthly Q&As and ongoing access to writing teachers, including Alice Gaines and Beth Barany

As always, you can ask us follow-up questions in email if you need help applying these concepts to your story.

You have access to this exclusive training that can radically improve the reader’s experience of your story. The duration of this access is for as long as we deliver trainings, so the life of Barany Consulting as a business entity.

Take advantage of this special training today!

Mastering Deep Point of View

We’re looking forward to seeing you there!

Beth & Alice


We offer a 30-day money back guarantee... If you are not satisfied with this training for any reason, we are happy to refund you.


USA Today bestselling author Alice Gaines writes about nice people having outrageous sex.

She’s published with numerous houses, including Red Sage, Dorchester, Harlequin Spice Briefs, Carina Press, and Avon Impulse.

Her Regency romance, Captain and Countess, was one of the first ten books selected for Kindle Scout.

Over her long career, she's won several awards and contests for her writing. She currently writes erotic contemporary romance and sizzling paranormal romance for Entangled Publishing and Changeling Press.

With a PhD in Psychology from UC Berkeley, she's a firm believer that Deep Point of View is a powerful tool for pulling readers into your story.

Beth Barany


Beth Barany is an award-winning novelist, master neuro-linguistic programming practitioner, and certified creativity coach for writers.

She specializes in helping writers experience clarity, so they can write, revise, and proudly publish their novels to the delight of their readers. Her courses are packed with useful hands-on information that you can implement right away.

She runs an online school for fiction writers and a 12-month group coaching program to help them get published. More resources on publishing, book marketing, and novel writing on her blog, Writer's Fun Zone.

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