{"id":21958,"date":"2019-08-01T03:00:20","date_gmt":"2019-08-01T10:00:20","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/writersfunzone.com\/blog\/?p=21958"},"modified":"2019-07-30T16:02:26","modified_gmt":"2019-07-30T23:02:26","slug":"creating-tension-at-the-micro-level-by-c-s-lakin","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/writersfunzone.com\/blog\/2019\/08\/01\/creating-tension-at-the-micro-level-by-c-s-lakin\/","title":{"rendered":"Creating Tension at the Micro Level by C. S. Lakin"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><a href=\"https:\/\/writersfunzone.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/07\/Creating-Tension-at-the-Micro-Level.png\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignleft wp-image-21961 size-medium\" title=\"Creating Tension at the Micro Level\" src=\"https:\/\/writersfunzone.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/07\/Creating-Tension-at-the-Micro-Level-300x300.png\" alt=\"Creating Tension at the Micro Level\" width=\"300\" height=\"300\" srcset=\"https:\/\/writersfunzone.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/07\/Creating-Tension-at-the-Micro-Level-300x300.png 300w, https:\/\/writersfunzone.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/07\/Creating-Tension-at-the-Micro-Level-160x160.png 160w, https:\/\/writersfunzone.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/07\/Creating-Tension-at-the-Micro-Level-320x320.png 320w, https:\/\/writersfunzone.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/07\/Creating-Tension-at-the-Micro-Level.png 600w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" \/><\/a>Please welcome guest writer, C. S. Lakin, who shares about how to create tension in your fiction. Enjoy!<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">***<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><strong>Tension is created by lack.<\/strong> Lack of understanding, lack of closure, lack of equilibrium or peace. When your readers have questions, that creates tension. When they need to know what happens next, that is tension.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Masterful writers keep their readers in a constant state of tension. And that\u2019s a good thing.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">But here\u2019s something to keep in mind: our characters may be tense, but that doesn\u2019t mean readers are tense in response. A character with a tightened fist or clenched jaw does not ensure readers will respond in the same way. And that might not even be the desired response a writer is hoping for.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><b>What the characters think, feel, and show must be carefully executed to evoke the desired emotional response in readers.\u00a0<\/b><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">The tension we writers want to focus on most is the tension our readers feel. If we don\u2019t keep them in a state of expectation, they\u2019ll start nodding off, and next thing you know, our novel slips unread to the floor.<\/span><\/p>\n<h2><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Tension on Every Page\u00a0<\/span><\/h2>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">That means getting tension on every page. How is that possible?<\/span><\/p>\n<p><strong>By focusing on microtension.<\/strong><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Just what is microtension? Just as the prefix suggests, it\u2019s tension on a micro level, or in small, barely noticeable increments. Your big plot twists and reversals and surprises are macro-tension items. And those have great potential for sparking emotional response in readers. But microtension is achieved on a line-by-line basis.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<h2><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Microtension is\u2026<\/span><\/h2>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">For example, anytime a character has conflicting feelings, you have microtension. Microtension can be small, simmering, subtext, subtle. Even the choice of words or the turn of a phrase can produce microtension by its freshness or unexpected usage.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Microtension is created by the element of surprise. When readers are surprised by the action in the scene, the reaction of characters, or their own emotional reactions, that is successful microtension at work.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><strong>A sudden change in emotion can create tension.<\/strong> A character struggling between two opposite emotions creates tension. Odd contradictory emotions and reactions can create microtension.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Microtension is created when things feel off, feel contradictory, seem puzzling.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Maybe that sounds crazy, but if characters are sitting around happy with nothing bothering them, you have a boring scene that readers will stop reading. Sure, at the end of your book, you might have that wonderful happy moment when it&#8217;s all wrapped up and the future, finally, looks bright, but that&#8217;s why the book ends there.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<h2><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Use Inner Conflict to Create Microtension<\/span><\/h2>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">At any given moment, we are feeling a number of different emotions, and they often clash. By going deep into your characters and drawing out that type of inner conflict as often as possible, you can bring microtension into your scenes. Yes, you will have outer conflict as well (hopefully a lot of it). But by adding the inner conflict, you can ramp up the microtension.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<h2><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Strive for the unexpected<\/span><\/h2>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Try to avoid common expressions we\u2019ve all heard before. Think past the obvious first emotion and find something deeper, something submerged and underlying the superficial emotion. Strive for the unexpected.<\/span><\/p>\n<h2><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Ramp up the Tension: 3 Ways to Add Microtension\u00a0<\/span><\/h2>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Here are three areas and ways you can add microtension to your scenes:<\/span><\/p>\n<p><b>#1 Dialogue:<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Examine each line of dialogue. Take out boring and unnecessary words and trivial matters. Go for clever. Find a way to give each speaker a unique voice and style of speaking.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><strong>Subtext can hint at what characters are really feeling below the surface, and that creates mystery.\u00a0<\/strong><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Keep in mind the tension is in the relationship between the characters speaking, not in the information presented.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><b>#2 Action:<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">This can be with any kind of action\u2014high or low. Even a gesture is action. So think how to make an action incongruous. What does that mean?\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Real people are conflicted all the time. Real people are complex, inconsistent.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><strong>So by having a character react in an incongruent manner<\/strong>, and having incongruent developments in the storyline, will add microtension.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Have things happen and characters react in ways the reader does not expect. And, most importantly, show everything through the POV character\u2019s emotions.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Action will not be tense unless the character is experiencing it and emotionally reacting to it.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><b>#3 Exposition:\u00a0<\/b><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Exposition is the prose, your writing. It is the way you explain what is happening as you show it. It includes internal monologue.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Find ways to add those conflicted emotions and create dissonance. Show ideas at war with one another. Use word choices that feel contradictory. Find fresh, different ways to describe common things.<\/span><\/p>\n<h2><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Universal Feelings Resonate\u00a0<\/span><\/h2>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Remember, when you tap into universal feelings\u2014human experiences many share\u2014the thoughts and actions of a character will resonate. And when something resonates, such as in music when a sound wave causes a string to vibrate, it elicits a response.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">The emotions readers feel when an author is a master at microtension are intrigue, curiosity, excitement, fascination, unease, and dread.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><strong>In other words<\/strong>, when you sense something coming around the corner and you don\u2019t know what it is, it triggers emotions. Depending on the story and genre, those might be fear, anguish, giddiness, mirth, terror, or titillation.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">If a writer masterfully creates microtension, she is going to get readers committed to her story and her characters, feeling tense all the way to the last line of the novel.<\/span><\/p>\n<h2><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Want to learn how to become a masterful wielder of emotion in your fiction?\u00a0<\/span><\/h2>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Enroll in Lakin\u2019s new online video course, <\/span><b>Emotional Mastery for Fiction Writers<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">, <\/span><b>before September 1<\/b><b>st<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">, and get half off <\/span><a href=\"https:\/\/cslakin.teachable.com\/p\/emotional-mastery-for-fiction-writers\/?product_id=1217587&amp;coupon_code=EARLY-BIRD-PRICING---GOOD-THROUGH-8-31-19&amp;affcode=26347_a_vi-_gx\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\"><b>using this link<\/b><\/a><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">!<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><a href=\"https:\/\/cslakin.teachable.com\/p\/emotional-mastery-for-fiction-writers\/?product_id=1217587&amp;coupon_code=EARLY-BIRD-PRICING---GOOD-THROUGH-8-31-19&amp;affcode=26347_a_vi-_gx\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"https:\/\/cslakin.teachable.com\/p\/emotional-mastery-for-fiction-writers\/?product_id=1217587&amp;coupon_code=early-bird-pricing---good-through-8-31-19&amp;affcode=26347_a_vi-_gx noopener noreferrer\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-21960 size-medium\" title=\"Emotional Mastery for Fiction Writers\" src=\"https:\/\/writersfunzone.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/07\/Emotional-Mastery-Course-Image-300x150.jpg\" alt=\"Emotional Mastery for Fiction Writers\" width=\"300\" height=\"150\" srcset=\"https:\/\/writersfunzone.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/07\/Emotional-Mastery-Course-Image-300x150.jpg 300w, https:\/\/writersfunzone.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/07\/Emotional-Mastery-Course-Image.jpg 600w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" \/><\/a><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">***<\/span><\/p>\n<h2><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">ABOUT THE AUTHOR\u00a0<\/span><\/h2>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><a href=\"https:\/\/www.livewritethrive.com\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignleft wp-image-21959\" title=\"C.S. Lakin\" src=\"https:\/\/writersfunzone.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/07\/Susanne-press-7-cropped-300x292.jpg\" alt=\"C.S. Lakin\" width=\"150\" height=\"146\" srcset=\"https:\/\/writersfunzone.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/07\/Susanne-press-7-cropped-300x292.jpg 300w, https:\/\/writersfunzone.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/07\/Susanne-press-7-cropped-768x748.jpg 768w, https:\/\/writersfunzone.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/07\/Susanne-press-7-cropped-1024x997.jpg 1024w, https:\/\/writersfunzone.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/07\/Susanne-press-7-cropped-640x623.jpg 640w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 150px) 100vw, 150px\" \/><\/a>C. S. Lakin is an editor, award-winning <\/span><a href=\"https:\/\/www.livewritethrive.com\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">blogger<\/span><\/a><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">, and <\/span><a href=\"https:\/\/www.amazon.com\/C.-S.-Lakin\/e\/B003K5YWYC\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">author<\/span><\/a><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> of twenty novels and the Writer\u2019s Toolbox series of instructional books for novelists. She edits and critiques more than 200 manuscripts a year and teaches workshops and <\/span><a href=\"https:\/\/www.writingforlifeworkshops.com\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">boot camps<\/span><\/a><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> to help writers craft masterful novels.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Tension is created by lack. 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