{"id":1835,"date":"2011-01-18T03:00:51","date_gmt":"2011-01-18T09:00:51","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/writersfunzone.com\/blog\/?p=1835"},"modified":"2024-11-21T22:55:11","modified_gmt":"2024-11-22T06:55:11","slug":"writing-snappy-dialogue","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/writersfunzone.com\/blog\/2011\/01\/18\/writing-snappy-dialogue\/","title":{"rendered":"Writing Snappy Dialogue by Janice Seagraves"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><a href=\"https:\/\/writersfunzone.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/01\/WFZ_Writing-Snappy-Dialogue-by-Janice-Seagraves.png\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignleft size-full wp-image-28989\" src=\"https:\/\/writersfunzone.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/01\/WFZ_Writing-Snappy-Dialogue-by-Janice-Seagraves.png\" alt=\"\" width=\"300\" height=\"300\" srcset=\"https:\/\/writersfunzone.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/01\/WFZ_Writing-Snappy-Dialogue-by-Janice-Seagraves.png 300w, https:\/\/writersfunzone.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/01\/WFZ_Writing-Snappy-Dialogue-by-Janice-Seagraves-80x80.png 80w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" \/><\/a>Aspiring authors often ask me what is the best way to become better writers. I always say:<\/p>\n<p>Read.<\/p>\n<p>Read.<\/p>\n<p>Read.<\/p>\n<p>And today&#8217;s guest columnist adds a very important component: Listen. Listen. Listen.<\/p>\n<p>Listen in as <a title=\"Janice Seagraves website\" href=\"https:\/\/janice-seagraves.org\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Janice Seagraves<\/a> shares about how to write snappy dialogue.<\/p>\n<p>^*^<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/writersfunzone.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2018\/01\/rsz_windswept-cover3thisisit-1.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"wp-image-18257 size-medium alignleft\" style=\"margin: 6px;\" title=\"Windswept SHore by Janice Seagraves\" src=\"https:\/\/writersfunzone.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2018\/01\/rsz_windswept-cover3thisisit-1-200x300.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"200\" height=\"300\" srcset=\"https:\/\/writersfunzone.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2018\/01\/rsz_windswept-cover3thisisit-1-200x300.jpg 200w, https:\/\/writersfunzone.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2018\/01\/rsz_windswept-cover3thisisit-1.jpg 266w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 200px) 100vw, 200px\" \/><\/a> The best snappy dialogue that comes to my mind is from the movies of the 30\u2019s and 40\u2019s, think Kathryn Hepburn, and Cary Grant. These are the two actors who I think of as the King and Queen of snappy dialogue.<\/p>\n<p><strong>Cary Grant example: <\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Eva Marie Saint\u00a0(Eve Kendall): I tipped the steward five dollars to seat you here if you should come in.<\/p>\n<p>Cary Grant\u00a0(Roger Thornhill): Is that a proposition?<\/p>\n<p>Eva Marie Saint\u00a0(Eve): I never discuss love on an empty stomach.<\/p>\n<p>Cary Grant\u00a0(Roger): You&#8217;ve already eaten!<\/p>\n<p>Eva Marie Saint\u00a0(Eve): But you haven&#8217;t.<\/p>\n<p>~*~<\/p>\n<p>Snappy dialogue isn\u2019t clunky, it flows. There a teasing quality to it and you can\u2019t help a grin when it goes just right.<\/p>\n<p><strong>Kathryn Hepburn\u2019s example:<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Howard Hughes: [doesn&#8217;t hear what Kate says] Excuse me?<\/p>\n<p>Katharine Hepburn: Well, if you&#8217;re deaf, you must own up to it. Get a hearing aid, or see my father. He&#8217;s an urologist, but it&#8217;s all tied up inside the\u00a0body, don&#8217;t you find?<\/p>\n<p>Howard Hughes: Mmm.<\/p>\n<p>Katharine Hepburn: Me, I keep healthy. I take 7 showers\u00a0a day to keep clean, also because I&#8217;m so vulgarly referred to as &#8220;outdoors-y.&#8221; Well, I&#8217;m not &#8220;outdoors-y,&#8221; I&#8217;m athletic. I sweat! There it is, now we both know the sordid truth: I sweat, and you&#8217;re deaf. Aren&#8217;t we a fine pair of misfits?<\/p>\n<p>~*~<\/p>\n<p>I think some of my best scenes in my book, <em>Windswept Shores<\/em>, where the dialogue just flows are the ones where the hero teases the heroine.<\/p>\n<p><em>Windswept Shores<\/em>\u2019 example:<\/p>\n<blockquote><p>\u201cIf I had me a net, I could catch some of those fishies for dinner.\u201d Seth paddled water while he gazed into the pool.<br \/>\n\u201cDon\u2019t you have a net on the boat?\u201d<br \/>\n\u201cWe usually use fishing poles.\u201d<br \/>\n\u201cNo, I mean to net the fish after you reel them in.\u201d She swam over to him.<br \/>\n\u201cI don\u2019t reckon you know the difference between fresh and salt water fishing, mate.\u201d<br \/>\n\u201cOkay, what\u2019s the difference?\u201d She splashed water just in front of him.<br \/>\nHis smile twisted to the side. \u201cWhen you fish in the sea, they&#8217;re a mite bigger.\u201d<br \/>\n\u201cOkay, smarty pants, how do you get the fish into the boat?\u201d<br \/>\n\u201cYou use a big stick with a hook to pull them in.\u201d<br \/>\n\u201cOh, I think I did see that somewhere.\u201d<br \/>\n\u201cProbably, you accidentally lit on it when ya flipped through the channels on the box.\u201d<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>~*~<\/p>\n<p>The best way to learn snappy dialogue is to listen to it.<\/p>\n<p>Watch those wonderful films of the 30\u2019s and 40\u2019s, or anything that has snappy banter.<\/p>\n<p>If you\u2019re lucky enough to know people who pick and tease in the same manner, then listen to their conversations. And it might just make you smile.<\/p>\n<p>It\u2019s all in the ear. And it can be learned.<\/p>\n<p><em>Windswept Shores<\/em>\u2019 example (it\u2019s not all one sided, Megan gets her turn):<\/p>\n<blockquote><p>Walking back to the Dinki-Di, Seth complained with a glance at her bikini, \u201cWhy did you put your cossie back on?\u201d<br \/>\n\u201cI\u2019m not comfortable naked,\u201d she explained. \u201cWhat if someone showed up while I\u2019m undressed?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>He gazed around, then back down at her. \u201cMegz, no one is here.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cNo, but you showed up not once, but twice, didn\u2019t you?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cUm, yeah,\u201d Seth muttered with a slight frown.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cCan\u2019t argue with that, can you?\u201d She grinned. I love winning an argument.<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>***<\/p>\n<h2>ABOUT JANICE SEAGRAVES<\/h2>\n<p>When not writing late into the night, Janice takes care of her hubby of thirty-one years and a just grown daughter. They are owned by an overly affectionate cat and two birds. One a handicapped dove and the other a pigeon who is in love with her husband (not kidding).<\/p>\n<p>You can find Janice\u2019s book, <em>Windswept Shores<\/em>, at <a title=\"Windswept Shores at PinkPetal books\" href=\"http:\/\/pinkpetalbooks.com\/index.php?main_page=product_info&amp;cPath=6&amp;products_id=66\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Pink Petal Books<\/a>.<br \/>\nWindswept Shores\u2019 <a title=\"Windswept Shores book trailer\" href=\"http:\/\/www.youtube.com\/watch?v=t_r2NXKT0Sg\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">book trailer<\/a><\/p>\n<blockquote><p>Janice Seagraves\u2019s website:<a title=\"Janice Seagraves website\" href=\"https:\/\/janice-seagraves.org\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\"> http:\/\/janiceseagraves.org\/<\/a><br \/>\nHer main blog: <a title=\"Janice Seagraves blog\" href=\"http:\/\/ladyjanice.blogspot.com\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">http:\/\/ladyjanice.blogspot.com\/<\/a><br \/>\nFacebook page: <a title=\"Janice Seagraves on Facebook\" href=\"http:\/\/www.facebook.com\/janice.seagraves\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">http:\/\/www.facebook.com\/janice.seagraves<\/a><br \/>\nAnd twitter: <a title=\"Janice Seagraves on Twitter\" href=\"http:\/\/twitter.com\/janiceseagraves\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">http:\/\/twitter.com\/janiceseagraves<\/a><\/p><\/blockquote>\n<h3><span style=\"color: #ff6600;\"><strong>How do you pick up good dialogue for your stories? Comment below.<\/strong><\/span><\/h3>\n<p>I love eavesdropping in cafes.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>The best snappy dialogue that comes to my mind is from the movies of the 30\u2019s and 40\u2019s, think Kathryn Hepburn, and Cary Grant. 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