{"id":13356,"date":"2015-09-08T01:00:24","date_gmt":"2015-09-08T08:00:24","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/writersfunzone.com\/blog\/?p=13356"},"modified":"2015-09-04T18:11:19","modified_gmt":"2015-09-05T01:11:19","slug":"3-essential-editing-tips-getting-feedback-pt-2","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/writersfunzone.com\/blog\/2015\/09\/08\/3-essential-editing-tips-getting-feedback-pt-2\/","title":{"rendered":"3 Essential Editing Tips: Getting Feedback (Pt 2)"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><a href=\"https:\/\/writersfunzone.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/08\/2349632625_4eba371b56_z-e1440816745290.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\" wp-image-13412 alignleft\" src=\"https:\/\/writersfunzone.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/08\/2349632625_4eba371b56_z-e1440816745290-300x300.jpg\" alt=\"2349632625_4eba371b56_z\" width=\"268\" height=\"268\" srcset=\"https:\/\/writersfunzone.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/08\/2349632625_4eba371b56_z-e1440816745290-300x300.jpg 300w, https:\/\/writersfunzone.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/08\/2349632625_4eba371b56_z-e1440816745290-160x160.jpg 160w, https:\/\/writersfunzone.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/08\/2349632625_4eba371b56_z-e1440816745290-520x520.jpg 520w, https:\/\/writersfunzone.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/08\/2349632625_4eba371b56_z-e1440816745290-720x720.jpg 720w, https:\/\/writersfunzone.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/08\/2349632625_4eba371b56_z-e1440816745290.jpg 425w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 268px) 100vw, 268px\" \/><\/a>In this post, part 2 on <strong>3 Essential Editing Tips<\/strong> I talk about getting feedback.\u00a0You can read Part 1 <a href=\"http:\/\/wp.me\/p13IRf-3to\">here<\/a>.<\/p>\n<p>***<\/p>\n<h2>Getting Feedback<\/h2>\n<p>When I finish a story, I don&#8217;t know if it&#8217;s any good. I&#8217;m too close to it. Do you have that experience?<\/p>\n<p>I could let it sit in a drawer for a month or a year, so that I can get my emotional and psychological distance, but I don&#8217;t have that kind of patience for many of my stories. (Though some I sit on for a long time.)<\/p>\n<p>To move the writing process forward, I get feedback on my stories.<\/p>\n<p>[<a href=\"http:\/\/ctt.ec\/hs80T\" target=\"_blank\">Click to Tweet about this (you can edit before sending).<\/a>]<\/p>\n<h2><strong>Where to Find Critique Partners<\/strong><\/h2>\n<p>Many people ask me where to find critique partners. I&#8217;ve found mine in my local Romance Writer&#8217;s of America chapter.<\/p>\n<p>I recommend you meet people in your local genre writing organizations and see if you can exchange manuscripts with them.<\/p>\n<p>Some people find critique partners online. Communities like <a href=\"http:\/\/ce.savvyauthors.com\/\" target=\"_blank\">SavvyAuthors.com<\/a> offer ways to find like-minded writers.<\/p>\n<p>Facebook groups are a resource too. A friend of mine found one of her critique partners at the <a href=\"http:\/\/sfrbrigade.webs.com\/\" target=\"_blank\">Science Fiction Romance Brigade<\/a> group on Facebook.<\/p>\n<hr \/>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><span style=\"color: #ff6600;\"><strong>The key is to ask for what you want. (In getting writing support as in life!)<\/strong><\/span><\/p>\n<hr \/>\n<p>Once you&#8217;ve found a supportive critique partner, ask for the kind of feedback you&#8217;d like, and not like.<\/p>\n<h2>What to Ask Them<\/h2>\n<p>When I&#8217;m handing off a first draft that&#8217;s been cleaned up for grammar as best I can, I ask these questions:<\/p>\n<blockquote>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 30px;\">Hi [Awesome critique partner];<\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 30px;\">Thanks for your help on my [title\/working title] xxx length book.<\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 30px;\">Please let me know your thoughts on: &#8212; character arc &#8212; plot &#8212; strength\/weaknesses as a romance<\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 30px;\">And anything else that confused you. And the things you liked!<\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 30px;\">No need to point out typos, unless they really bugged you. \ud83d\ude09 Thanks, Your bestest buddy, Sincerely, Awesome Author<\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n<p>Feel free to use this as a template for your first request. (Be sure to take out the generic stuff and the silly stuff, if you want.)<\/p>\n<h2>Next Steps<\/h2>\n<p>I usually wait a day or two before inputting the changes pointed out by my critique partner. I take her feedback with a grain of salt. I&#8217;m the final decider after all. (You&#8217;re the decider!)<\/p>\n<p><strong>My attitude:<\/strong> I keep my overall story goal in mind and the overall impact I want my story to have on the reader.<\/p>\n<p>For example, for my romance, I want them to be a fun and light read that touches the heart. For my fantasy, I want to create a page-turning adventure of transformation. In both cases, I want my characters to be compelling and for my readers to feel as if they are my point of view characters.<\/p>\n<p><strong>My actions:<\/strong> I work on the story in a few sessions, taking the story section by section, starting from the beginning and moving through to the end.<\/p>\n<p>After I&#8217;ve worked on the edits as best as I can, I get final feedback from advanced readers. I&#8217;ll go into this next week.<\/p>\n<p>What questions do you have about editing?<\/p>\n<p>Please comment and let me know your thoughts. I&#8217;m always interested in hearing from you!<\/p>\n<p>All my best,<\/p>\n<p>\u2665<\/p>\n<p>Beth<\/p>\n<p>PS. Part 3 in this series is coming next week.<\/p>\n<p>PPS. If you\u2019d like to talk to a writer\u2019s coach about help with your editing, <a href=\"https:\/\/writersfunzone.com\/blog\/talk-to-a-writing-coach\/\" target=\"_blank\">click here to schedule your call.<\/a><\/p>\n<hr \/>\n<h2>ABOUT BETH BARANY<\/h2>\n<div id=\"attachment_11378\" style=\"width: 410px\" class=\"wp-caption alignleft\"><a href=\"http:\/\/author.bethbarany.com\/ya-fantasy\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"http:\/\/author.bethbarany.com\/ya-fantasy\/\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-11378\" class=\"wp-image-11378\" title=\"The Five Kingdom series about Henrietta The Dragon Slayer by Beth Barany\" src=\"https:\/\/writersfunzone.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/09\/Copy-of-Untitled-design.png\" alt=\"The Five Kingdom series about Henrietta The Dragon Slayer by Beth Barany\" width=\"400\" height=\"185\" srcset=\"https:\/\/writersfunzone.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/09\/Copy-of-Untitled-design.png 650w, https:\/\/writersfunzone.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/09\/Copy-of-Untitled-design-300x138.png 300w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 400px) 100vw, 400px\" \/><\/a><p id=\"caption-attachment-11378\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">The Five Kingdom series about Henrietta The Dragon Slayer by Beth Barany<\/p><\/div>\n<p><a href=\"http:\/\/author.bethbarany.com\/\" target=\"_blank\">Award-winning novelist<\/a> and creativity coach for writers, Beth Barany has been making up fantasy and adventure stories all her life. She writes magical tales of romance and adventure for women and girls to transport them to new worlds where anything is possible. She <a href=\"http:\/\/bethbarany.com\/\" target=\"_blank\">empowers novelists to write, publish, and market their genre novels.<\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>In this post, part 2 on 3 Essential Editing Tips I talk about getting feedback.\u00a0You can read Part 1 here. *** Getting Feedback When I finish a story, I don&#8217;t know if it&#8217;s any&#46;&#46;&#46;<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":4,"featured_media":13412,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"_exactmetrics_skip_tracking":false,"_exactmetrics_sitenote_active":false,"_exactmetrics_sitenote_note":"","_exactmetrics_sitenote_category":0,"footnotes":""},"categories":[20],"tags":[140,146,2558],"class_list":["post-13356","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","has-post-thumbnail","hentry","category-writing-tips","tag-beth-barany","tag-editing","tag-editing-novels"],"yoast_head":"<!-- This site is optimized with the 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