{"id":12971,"date":"2015-06-26T01:00:53","date_gmt":"2015-06-26T08:00:53","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/writersfunzone.com\/blog\/?p=12971"},"modified":"2015-06-26T12:08:16","modified_gmt":"2015-06-26T19:08:16","slug":"revising-with-timelines-by-laura-bickle","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/writersfunzone.com\/blog\/2015\/06\/26\/revising-with-timelines-by-laura-bickle\/","title":{"rendered":"Revising with Timelines By Laura Bickle"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><a href=\"http:\/\/amzn.to\/1TPW40L\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"http:\/\/amzn.to\/1TPW40L\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignleft wp-image-12972\" title=\"Dark Alchemy\" src=\"https:\/\/writersfunzone.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/DARKALCHEMYWeb-185x300.jpg\" alt=\"Dark Alchemy\" width=\"200\" height=\"324\" srcset=\"https:\/\/writersfunzone.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/DARKALCHEMYWeb-185x300.jpg 185w, https:\/\/writersfunzone.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/DARKALCHEMYWeb-633x1024.jpg 633w, https:\/\/writersfunzone.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/DARKALCHEMYWeb-300x485.jpg 300w, https:\/\/writersfunzone.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/DARKALCHEMYWeb.jpg 927w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 200px) 100vw, 200px\" \/><\/a>Today we welcome a new guest writer to Writer\u2019s Fun Zone, <a href=\"http:\/\/amzn.to\/1GLHJLL\" target=\"_blank\">Laura Bickle<\/a>\u00a0who is stopping by to chat with us today about \u201cRevising with Timelines.\u201d \u00a0<em>Enjoy!<\/em><\/p>\n<p>***<\/p>\n<p><strong>Writers tend to get into a lot of trouble with time.<\/strong> There&#8217;s making time to write, managing deadlines, and the vagaries of market timing.<\/p>\n<p>One issue with time, however, is entirely within the author&#8217;s control. And that&#8217;s the timeline of the story.<\/p>\n<p><strong>I never paid a whole lot of critical attention to time when I read.<\/strong> Sure, I was conscious that some passages in stories could be languid and slow-moving like a drippy faucet. Others were exhaustingly rushed. I never was quite able to put my finger on why.<\/p>\n<p>And then, when my first book was accepted for publication, I discovered the answer:\u00a0 books can grow timeline issues. They&#8217;re very subtle, but can really cause problems with the reader&#8217;s perception of a work.<\/p>\n<p><strong>A timeline problem occurs when characters have too many events crammed into a period of time &#8211; or not enough.<\/strong> A succession of tasks emerges that would require the bending of the rules of the space-time continuum or superhuman abilities to accomplish. It occurs when your main character hasn&#8217;t slept for days. It happens when she travels an impossible distance in an hour. It can take place when your main character hasn&#8217;t worked regular hours at her day job without explanation. This goes for crazy amounts of overtime, or not working at all. It happens when your character is doing &#8220;cop stuff&#8221; for seven days in a row without a day off or at least a pro forma request for overtime.\u00a0 It&#8217;s easy for an author to lose track of what day it is, and a character can get trapped in a month-long weekend or a year of Wednesdays.<\/p>\n<p>Mundane concerns? Maybe. But they catch an editor&#8217;s eye and seep into the subconscious of the reader. And sometimes, we&#8217;ve gotta pay attention to the rules of the real world &#8211; like time &#8211; in order to allow the reader to suspend disbelief for the really magical things we want to do with the story.<\/p>\n<p><strong>My first editor asked me to turn a timeline in with my book.<\/strong> Something simple, listing the day, night, and all the scenes that happened in each. By reviewing my manuscript in this way, I could see where I crammed too many activities into the heroine&#8217;s day\u00a0 &#8211; or (eep!) not enough. When I finish a draft, I read through it and start constructing my timeline.<\/p>\n<p>I also create a second list that&#8217;s not strictly a timeline. It&#8217;s one that notes where chapters begin and end, how many scenes are included in the chapter, and how many pages each chapter is. Sticking a ten-page chapter next to a twenty-five page chapter creates unevenness, and keeping a note helps me be more aware of it. It also shows me where I have a bunch of stubby two-page scenes strung together. This causes me to question whether I&#8217;m head-hopping or whether I really need to find a way to collapse those scenes into less choppy ones. It helps me analyze flow. It also shows me whether I&#8217;m doing a good job of ending chapters in the middle of the action, causing the reader to want to turn the page to the next.<\/p>\n<p><strong>By doing this kind of post-hoc analysis<\/strong>, and correcting the results, I found that pacing issues automatically ironed themselves out.<\/p>\n<p>I&#8217;ve turned a timeline in for every book since, whether or not I was asked. And it&#8217;s really reduced the amount of time I spend fixing structural issues in revisions. Now, I tend to work with that timeline in my head, and it keeps me honest. It keeps my very human characters from turning into Wonder Women and Supermen.<\/p>\n<p><strong>Not only do I have to manage time<\/strong>, but my characters do, too. Maintaining a timeline is a front-line editing fix I suggest that every writer keep in the toolbox.<\/p>\n<p>***<\/p>\n<h2>ABOUT THE AUTHOR<\/h2>\n<p><a href=\"http:\/\/www.laurabickle.com\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"http:\/\/www.laurabickle.com\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignleft wp-image-12973\" title=\"Laura Bickle\" src=\"https:\/\/writersfunzone.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/BickleAuthorWeb-225x300.jpg\" alt=\"Laura Bickle\" width=\"150\" height=\"200\" srcset=\"https:\/\/writersfunzone.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/BickleAuthorWeb-225x300.jpg 225w, https:\/\/writersfunzone.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/BickleAuthorWeb-768x1024.jpg 768w, https:\/\/writersfunzone.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/BickleAuthorWeb-300x400.jpg 300w, https:\/\/writersfunzone.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/BickleAuthorWeb.jpg 900w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 150px) 100vw, 150px\" \/><\/a>Laura Bickle grew up in rural Ohio, reading entirely too many comic books out loud to her favorite Wonder Woman doll. Her most recent novel is <a href=\"http:\/\/amzn.to\/1TPW40L\" target=\"_blank\">DARK ALCHEMY<\/a> (Harper Voyager Impulse). The latest updates on Laura\u2019s work can be found at <a href=\"http:\/\/www.laurabickle.com\" target=\"_blank\">www.laurabickle.com<\/a>.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Writers tend to get into a lot of trouble with time. 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